Today we did peer assessment for our trailers in our class and we got feedback on our trailer, here is a paragraph of all our feedback we got summed up.
One point was that people really like the soundtrack, especially with the siren effect. However they said that it needs to be fitted in better in sync with the trailer, so that the heartbeat fits in with what going on with the screenplay. Another positive point is that people liked the final scene of the trailer as it is scary, but would be better with a loud sound effect to make it jumpy. There was some critical feedback on our trailer as well which was helpful as it means we will find it easier to improve our trailer. They were some comments such as some parts of the dialogue could do with being louder. Also we may need more shot diversity as the shots of people running away can be very repetitive. Furthermore the writing is good, but may need to be clearer as it can be hard to read at times. Finally we may need to add some scenes at the start explaining what the people are doing and who they are hunting.
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